Our
generation is the generation of evolution. How now people get more involved in
new things and ideas. For example, no one thought that someday people would
enjoy to stay in continuous communication with other people through the new
tools of technology. I would say that because we use innovation as a tool we
are evolving into a new generation of human beings. In a way technology is a
good thing, but as we know not everything is perfect.
There
are some things that this new generation is getting used to and is turning into
a generation of comfort. People are relying especially on technology in order
to get ahead in life. Instead of going to a store and buying a movie, you can
just order it online or download it and watch it on your computer. The
experience of going to a store and just having human contact, is something
technology can replace. This face to face communication what our new generation
is losing. If you stay at home you lose what the basic human contact is about.
Technology
has also brought some advantages. Global communication has opened new doors for
new opportunities. As a new generation we depend on specific technology,
communication is key. For example I can now communicate with my family in
Ecuador and I am happy to hear my little sister’s voice on the phone every time
I call. Yet again technology has opened this door in order for me to be
communicated with my family.
Technology
has altered the way we view the world, opening new doors for generations to
come. Technology has its advantages and disadvantages, it is our decisions as
human beings to see how and for what we use technology. Let’s just hope the
generations that are heading this way don’t turn into technology freaks.
It's probably too late; we have already become "technology freaks."
ReplyDeleteYour use of specific examples (hearing your sister's voice, etc.) work to illustrate your point and create a more vivid picture for your reader.
Be sure to proofread your work with a tutor. Some of your sentences have syntax errors that could be ironed out with the help of a native speaker. Also, avoid general words like "things" and "people." Which people? What things?