Thursday, September 26, 2013

Julius Zabaneh- Rememberable experience

 I was going to the airport and we got our tickets to fly to Houston. It started off when we reached the security stop and were checking the luggage. I told my brother,  "we have to rush so we don't miss the flight." The security guy said,  "wait I need to to search you."We said why we are getting  searched. He told us it was because you said rush. He started searching us  for  a while. I checked my watch and we only had fifteen minutes left before the plane departed. The decision was already known running to it was the only possible action. So we ran to the gate as fast as flash. After all the running and sweating it was there. I asked the advisory person if we missed the flight. She told us no because it was delayed for another forty-five minutes. Then we went to taco bell to eat something since there was so much time left. The advisory person announced that there was another delay for about an hour. We waited for a while then they told us it was canceled. The advisory person told us the next flight to Houston was not until tomorrow. Luckily the advisor directed us to a hotel to stay at for the night. By the next morning we reached the plane.

1 comment:

  1. You did an excellent job just telling a story and letting the story speak for itself. Your piece should be longer, though. Can you add more specific details? Can you tell us how you were feeling as you were being frisked or as you worried about being late? Also, revise your work to make each sentence clearer, and be sure to format your story so that you have separate paragraphs.

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